User blog comment:ManinBlack007JK/My ideas./@comment-26426764-20150603124624

It's fine to have ghost characters. Why, some of my favorite characters are of that... species? (There is most likely not a better word for that) However, having them create the universe is a massive stretch, and there would be plenty of disagreement from the scientific community. Plus, we all know Polaris created the universe a long, long time ago. Really, if they are as powerful as you let on, being able to create a universe and everything, why do they interact with humans? Why would they be in a pizzeria? Do they really have any interest in animatronics? I know about the joy of creation, but this is taking things a tad too far.

Now, onto these "Cuco" things. I believe one is enough. Apparently, they cannot be killed too. Tell me, have you ever seen the scene in Jurassic Park where the small dinosaurs all come together to feed on a man who's fell onto the ground? Yes, it's possible for him to shake them off, maybe even kill a few so he has less to deal with. With Cuco, if her army were to grab me and group up on me, there is a possibility I could shake her and her friends off, yet, there would be literally no way to kill them. Going by this logic, Cuco has the most powerful army in the world. Sure, it would take a little while to defeat another army (They'd probably only be able to kill one soldier at a time), I'm sure they would destroy them quite easily. And what if she were to rebel against the Cutting Crew? Then, the entire world belongs to tiny little girls that all look the same. And that's no good. Also extremely overpowered.

The check for $100, 000 is highly questionable. My mother can tell you from experience, it's very, very rare for anyone to leave any money inside a hotel room, nevertheless, something as much as $100, 000. It's too much of a coincidence. It can be argued that Polaris was shining down on her on that day, but that would imply Polaris actually likes people. Which is extremely false.

The "hallucinating a god" thing is actually fine. Many people hallucinate gods telling them to do things, which is how some of the world's biggest crimes happen. I'd say it's fine, unless you make the "plot-twist" that "the god was actually real all along and only *insert name here* could see them because they are actually a god too!" because believe it or not, that's horribly overdone.

Now... haunting a plate... Why? There are much more desirable forms a ghost could take. For example, not haunting anything at all. Haunting a plate greatly decreases a ghost's abilities, including their natural talent to go invisible, and I assume she wouldn't even be able to go through solid objects either. It's silly to think that any ghost would pick a paper plate of all things over their regular form, which is much more powerful, and gives much more freedom on what they'd like to do.

Rant over. Everyone's characters have flaws. Mostly. I advise you improve on the things I said in my points, and then tell me more things you find questionable. Don't make things too stupid, oh Twinkling One.