Talk:Five Nights at FazbearFreak's 3/@comment-27010092-20170802133929

Storyline - 10/10
This part was f@cking amazing. It had a plot more original than a lot of other fan-games(it wasn't just "you're hired as a night guard get a paycheck after night 5 k"), and even had some pretty intense and revealing parts at the end. It came together pretty well.

Originality - 9/10
This was great for the most part. You managed to throw out the whole cliché with just nights and include the day, too, along with being sent on a mission instead if hiring as a security guard.

The only issue here is the mechanics, where most seem to have been used in FNaF games. There's a few new/rare ones, but not many. Still good, though.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation - 10/10
Must I explain?

Characters - 9/10
Good. My only problem is making the night ones Nightmare animatronics, when they could be another type of animatronic(killer, dreaded, death? Idk). They were still cool, though.

Descriptivness - 8/10
This was good for the most part! Until the section featuring the antagonists.

Overall, the daytime ones were described pretty well. Few missing details, but eh, who cares. The nighttime ones, however, didn't have that much description, other than "He is a Nightmare version of this character". Even though we may know what they already look like, one Nightmare animatronic may have distinct features that another one doesn't have(eye color, tears, etc.) so it's still good to describe them.

Good otherwise!

Overall total - 9/10
Very good! This was an interesting and fun-to read page. It managed to be a joke page and still have a good storyline, characters, etc. I insist any of you reading go and f@cking read this page.

k bye