Talk:Droid Season/@comment-27010092-20170930110705

Storyline - 7/10
For a little summary, you are hired at a landfill that hides secret government artifacts. A gang of very evil bois have found out, and now they, somehow, got a small loan of 1 million dollars, which they will use to buy a sh1t ton of droids to try and steal the artifacts. You must shoot down the flying droids so you have cash to go see "IT" and put overpriced fast food on your table.

Now, to me, it doesn't make sense the government is hiding artifacts in a landfill. There are many people who work at or need to visit them that it would make more sense to just hide them underground/in a secret base. Or, just ship them to a museum.

It also doesn't make sense that the gang, even all together, had enough money to purchase 250+ droids.

Also, why are they just sitting around and not doing anything to find the gang? We can infer that the droids have cameras so the gang can see what's going on and control them, which would require an Internet connection. They could be tracked and arrested. If there's no cameras, then they're standing outside watching the droids, which isn't likely, as police could find them quite fast.

However, past those flaws, it makes sense and is understandable.

Characters - 8.5/10
Well, there's really only one antagonist described. It's good and original overall, but I'd like to see some variation in the droids. Maybe upgraded versions that require 2-4 shots to destroy.

Descriptivness - 8/10
Not bad overall. However, you don't discuss how exactly the gang discovered the artifacts. You should at least say they found it through hacking or on some far corner of the Internet.

You also don't go very in depth on JonaEs, as all you really say is that he resembles WallE and has a name-tag. I insist that you describe the largest details about him, and either stop or keep going if you want. There's always Google if someone is looking for a minor detail.

Originality - 9/10
Doesn't really bring any new ideas or mechanics to the table, but it refuses to copy anything and just takes inspiration. Well done.

Grammar/Spelling - 9.5/10
Very minor mistakes, but overall very good.

B O N U S P O I N T S - 0/5
Pretty much everything good about this fit in the standards. This cannot lower your overall score.

Overall Total - 8.4/10
A pretty good game overall. While not a lot of consideration went into the storyline, it seems like it'd be a fun game to play. I insist you read the large if you're up for it.