Talk:Ten Nights in The Cave/@comment-30653199-20180416165130

Sounds pretty good, I love the characters the most! However, there are a few things which annoy me about this game. I'll list them for ya:

- The fact that 911 says they'll only be there in ten nights. That doesn't make any logical sense.

- What's the point of the Canned Food, Bottled Water and Game Boy? Are there hunger and thirst bars you need to constantly top up? Do you only have a limited supply of food and water and have to go collect more if you run out? As for the Game Boy, there's literally no point to it at all as a mechanic. It simply says you can play it when you get bored. It literally does nothing. Also, what does using our gun do? Does it drive away the monsters or simply kill them off (if the latter, that would be a little too OP)? Please, explain the mechanics in more detail.

- Is this game multiplayer? Because you have mentioned that the player is there with a bunch of friends. If so, is the game multiplayer or can you just run into your friends? If it's running into your friends, then that is a little lazy. Can they do anything to help you? Do they sell items which you can use against the monsters? If multiplayer, then you need to actually state that in your page. Once again, it's a case of not explaining the mechanics properly. Please fix this.

- The phone calls are quite lazy. No offense. It would be nice if you could put more effort into them.

- Once again, the in-game behaviours of each character. You need to explain how to get rid of each of them. Are some of them immune to weapons? Do you have to do something different for each character? Again with the mechanics. Please explain in more detail.

Finally, if those images aren't yours, then please give credit to the original creators. Apart from that, very good page, and has a lot of original ideas! Well done!