Talk:It's walls.../@comment-26525830-20180707130741

Okay, so I guess this is a thing?

Is it possible to be so confused yet so understanding that it hurts? If so, then that’s EXACTLY what I’m feeling after reading this. The story is all over the place, and there are many things that are not explained. How come a random video of children getting murdered shower up on Michael’s computer, how did he figure out he needed to put in a code, and how did he get it right on his first try? All of these confusing questions are only on chapter 1. It would geniuinely take a while to count them all. Your grammar is also quite bad, to the point where it’s actually kind of hard to make out the story.

Then there’s the... Gumball... Why would you throw the best show on daytime Cartoon Network into FNaF? Being said, I would have a problem with a FNaF style Gumball game, but then meeting actual FNaF characters is pretty awkward.

Lastly, well, the story’s just plain boring and lazy. Characters have as much personality as a jar of molasses. Dialogue and character interactions make me think you’ve never been in a conversation in your lifetime, and this is just how you imagine people talk to each other. Super rushed. Almost no detail between main story points.

So this story is bad, but you can improve it if you just follow our advice.