Five Nights at Freddy's Fanon Wiki:Chat/Logs/12 August 2015

 [11:54]  wall of text [11:54]  Score Breakdown [11:54]  Mirror, Mirror: Do I Know This Guy? 2 [11:54]  Beware the Monks of Cool: You Mean Plaid Is Out? 4 [11:54]  'Tis Your Destiny: Plain Joe 0 [11:54]  Oh, the Trauma: Healthy as a Horse 2 [11:54]  Momma Loves Me Best: Momma HATES Him! 2 [11:54]  Total: 10 [11:54]  what [11:55]  noir [11:55]  Ah [11:55]  time to enter [11:55]  mary sue [11:55]  Hello people. [11:55]  Score Breakdown [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Mirror, Mirror: Do I Know This Guy? 3 [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Beware the Monks of Cool: Yo! 11 [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> 'Tis Your Destiny: Hey, Wanna See My Crown-Shaped Birthmark? 14 [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Oh, the Trauma: Can't Complain 5 [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Momma Loves Me Best: Momma HATES Him! 2 [11:55] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Total: 35 [11:56] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> -Cain [11:56] <SilverCyberlink> What is this about? [11:56] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> A Mary Sue tester [11:56] <SilverCyberlink> Ah. [11:56] <SilverCyberlink> Can you link...actually I'll ask you later. [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> *Reads comments of Mary Sue tester* [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> "Jannet · 31 weeks ago [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Awesome! I actually got a great score for an animatronic character I was developing. It felt nice to get what I consider an almost completely accurate result. Much appreciated. :3" [11:57] <SilverCyberlink> Cool! [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Perhaps, [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Someone on this wiki is named [11:57] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> Jannet [11:58] <SilverCyberlink> I [11:58] <SilverCyberlink> I'm surprised this website isn't blocked. [11:58] <South Ferry> ahem [11:58] <South Ferry> mary sue breakdown [11:58] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> "Cain is nothing like you. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to. He always knew he was special, destined for great things - and probably made sure everyone else knew it too. He's come in for his share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And he's gotten no slack from you. [11:58] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> [11:58] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> In general, you care deeply about Cain, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. Cain is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him. " [11:58] <South Ferry> Score Breakdown [11:58] <South Ferry> Mirror, Mirror: Mirror, Mirror 60 [11:58] <South Ferry> Beware the Monks of Cool: James Dean, James Dean... 57 [11:58] <South Ferry> 'Tis Your Destiny: Stars For Her Eyes [11:58] <South Ferry> Oh, the Trauma: Valium Poster Child 59 [11:58] <South Ferry> Momma Loves Me Best: What A Brat! 57 [11:58] <South Ferry> Total: 295 [11:58] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> :) [11:59] <SilverCyberlink> Actually link me. [11:59] <South Ferry> the character: [11:59] <South Ferry> mary sue [11:59] <Your friendly neighborhood Spy> http://katfeete.net/writing/suestart.php [11:59] <South Ferry> Mary Sue isn't a character: she's you, or you as you'd like to be. She is so impossibly hip that she has difficulty seeing over her own pelvis; she'll probably die young, but damn, will it have been a good life. She'd have to be pretty dense to miss the signs that she is destined for great things; she can hardly take a walk without tripping over a sword in a stone or a mysterious old woman wanting to tell her fortune. She's had a rough life - to say the least! Angst? Histronics? Her speciality. And you, her creator, have spoilt her rotten and given her everything she wanted. [11:59] <South Ferry> [11:59] <South Ferry> You identify far too heavily with Mary Sue, and defend her from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make her perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break. Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one. [11:59] <SilverCyberlink> Thank you! [11:59] <SilverCyberlink> (I should be doing educational activities now...) &gt;:)