Talk:Steve's Mineshaft Manager/@comment-27010092-20181031013331

Storyline - 9/10
There isn't much I found wrong here. It really just a FNAS tycoon with other features to make it relevant to the storyline. It could have had a few more features to make it more interesting, but it was still good overall.

Characters - 7.5/10
The characters were pretty interesting, however, a lot of them were Minecraft mobs or other things. There weren't many new or undue characters present. However, I can partly forgive this, since it is Miencraft, and it obviously would make sense to have mobs from it be in the game. Basically, it just needs some more new characters.

Originality - 7/10
Not too bad. However, a lot of things seem to have been taken from the Pizzeria Simulator. A lot of original concepts were brought, but the concepts used for the certificate endings seemed to be a little unoriginal considering what they were like in the Pizzeria Simulator. But your other more original concepts were actually really unique and interesting.

Creativity - 10/10
For the new concepts you did bring in, they were amazing! I liked the items that you were able to buy, as they were original and interesting. Something I really enjoyed was the ability for employees to protest, as that's a very unique and interesting concept. The Dev Logs and storyline endings made it even better. Good job!

Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
Everything is written with good grammar and spelling. Not much to say here.

Total Socre - 8.7/10
While some parts lack originality, this is a very good game with many unique concepts that I haven't seen in other tycoon games. It has an interesting storyline for what is avaloable, and is a good way to complete the FNaS series. I would recommend you check out this page, it wouldn't be a waste of time.