Talk:Creepypasta: After 10PM Comes Death/@comment-6490352-20150826070811

Time to review, creepypasta style!

Now similar to other Creepypastas, this is sorta layed out in a diary entry, as it expresses emotion in that way. This is a short creepypasta but there is that build up, however, one minor complaint is the Mums never go for the children, or ask the authorities which pretty much leaves a giant hole. Yes, there was blood, but this blood was a bit... cartoony, I don't expect explosions of blood from wires and metal endoskeleton pieces. However, it's not a cliche as it's simply used correctly.

I have nothing to say about the athermath.

7/10