Talk:Four Shifts at the Scrap Factory/@comment-27010092-20170731231603

Storyline - 7/10
Not that bad. I have to say it seems a bit simplistic, basically just surviving in a factory. It also seems like the first 3 cutscenes are different ways of saying you're going to die, when mabye instead you could use nights 2 and 3 for more important messages that could convey more of the story.

The ending wasn't all that bad. I actually liked the fact that instead of surviving and getting your paycheck you die, since it gets away from that cliché.

Descriptivness - 9/10
Very good. Most things were described with a good amount of detail to get a picture in your head. One thing I noticed, though, was how the building itself didn't have that much detail. For instance, maybe you should describe the parts of the location seen throughout the game in one section so we have a better idea of it.

Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
Some typos, but hardly any. Contajulashins

Originality - 9/10
I enjoyed this part, as the mechanics weren't that bad. They were a little bit FNaF 3-ish, but they still weren't direct re-skins. Good for the most part.

Characters - 10/10
Very creative and original. I'll be honest, I haven't seen that many that were like these ones, meaning they're very original. Good job!

Overall Total: 9/10
Very good! While some-what short, it still managed to be quite well made with a good storyline and great characters.