Talk:One Night with Hybrid's 2/@comment-64.82.204.2-20151218164446

Look, once again you've got a frame--but it takes more than a frame. Look, I'll cut to the chase: it needs work. It's not necessarily "bad", I suppose, but it feels rushed. Try to take your time and go over it--flesh the story out here and there, along with actually getting the camera views finished.