Talk:The Breakfast Club/@comment-26434802-20150302022429

Despite being currently REALLY short, the reason that a toaster and a coffee maker could possibly be alive intruiges me. My one theory is that Lindsay may have too much free time, but that's just me. Why animatronics that were designed for children are out in Las Vegas confuses me, but I'll let that strange part of logic slip just this once.

Overall rating so far: While that little logic bloop is there, as I said, I'll let it slide this time. The story sounds very nice so far, the words you are using are being very descriptive of what is currently going on. My only advice would be to add a little more paragraphs each time you edit, I think 2-3 would be good per edit, but that's just some advice from a lowly Gaomon, so you don't have to listen, even if I AM the king of shipping.

7/8 (I'll reply to this comment whenever you want me to review it again when it has some more stuff on it)