Talk:Summer Job/@comment-27010092-20170715012226

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Storyline: 9/10

Pretty good overall! It is well done and fits together nicely. However, it isn't really explained as to why Mack does want to kill the guard. I don't know if Cyan drove him to the point of mental instability, but even then it wouldn't make sense for him to kill because of a haunting.

Mechanics: 9/10

Very good! I really enjoyed how you had to watch over and protect something while simultaneously defending yourself from antagonists.

Grammar/Spelling/Puncuation: 10/10

A guaranteed 10/10 for anyone over 13. Good job!

Descriptiveness: 8/10

Not bad. However, I noticed not all the characters are described appearance-wise. You don't need to go highly into detail, but it's still good to give an image of what a character would look like so we can have an image of it in our heads.

Some parts of the storyline aren't explained either, such as why Mack chooses to kill after disappearing and returning.

Originality: 10/10

I impressed. Nothing here is unoriginal. Sure, there's the door mechanic, but I'll be honest that it isn't the end of the world with the other creative mechanic.

I like how you actually have to defend something other than yourself for once in a game. I've thought of a lot of mechanics to use; a caffeine to keep yourself awake mechanic, an animatronic that protects you(not really a mechanic, more of a "helpful tool", but still), but never to defend something you don't have.

You also actually had humans go after you instead of the whole animatronic cliché(I actually thought of having the cannibal chase you in Five Nights at Frisky's 6, but then I decided to stop production on it and remaster the series). I don't recall anyone else doing that.

Overall, this is the game's strongest point. And that's good. Originality is good in games because it gives the player an oppurtunity to go through something different instead of just checking lights and closing doors or being chased by cheap pizzeria mascots.

Overall Rating: 9.2/10 This is an excellent game. It has a good storyline, good mechanics and originality that stands out from the rest of the games on this wiki. I would recommend those who have not read this to read it, as it is very well made.

Excellent job!