Talk:Ten Nights at Buck's:Revised./@comment-27010092-20181101002936

Storyline - 9/10
The sorry line here was very interesting! The fact that there were ten nights allowed for you to build up on the story well. The ending was pretty interesting. Well done!

Characters - 9/10
This game had tons of variety when it came to characters. There were tons of different ones, some old, some changed, and some entirely new ones.

The only issue is that it seemed like there were too many, sort of like what I wish I didn't do in Five Nights at Frisky's 5. I feel like if there were less characters, the game could be easier to keep up with, which sort of makes the beams more memorable in a way.

Originality - 9/10
I have to give you a lot of credit here. There are tons of new characters, many unique mini-games, and other interesting concepts. The only issue is with the mechanics, which I wish had a little more originality. It mainly seems like a combinations of mechanics from all of the FNaF games. Other than that, though, this was very original.

Descriptivness - 9/10
The majority of the page had detailed and comprehensible descriptions, ones that were able to help me imagine what the characters looked like. I feel as if other parts could have better description, such has the scenery fir the minigames, Overall, however, this was a strong point for this game.

Grammar/Spelling - 7/10
Most of this was okay. I did notice, however, lots of run-on sentences, along with some misspellings of words. It would also help if there were spaces after the commas(not a big deal, but it would help make the page look more organized).

The page is still readable, though, and I can understand what is on it. I would recommend putting more periods in it, as that would help a lot.

Total Score - 8.6/10
This was a very entertaining page, with tons of creativity and new concepts. The only negative part is that the grammar and spelling aren't spot on perfect, but it doesn't hinder comprehension all that much. I would recommend anyone else reading this review take a look at this page, as I think it would be worth your time.