Talk:Snowstruck Destruction/@comment-6490352-20150923053131

I'm in the review mood, so let's go, my first ever character review.

Grammar skills and presentation is nice, every thing is right in grammar-wise and something smart like that. I like how your specific with the date of how Snowstruck was made, and then we get into... oh no...

OK, on to everything else, headings are... alright, we do need some "Personality" and "Appearances" headings. The pictures are alright, nothing to write home about, and that's really it.

Honestly, the "Foxy Love" put me off, as animatronics don't have feelings (don't blame me all games/roleplay I made is fantasy) and despite this, your "broken" reason actually makes sense. If I find Goldie and Foxy to be friends, what you've done could work. The nice animatronic also put me off, as all animatronics are out for your BLUUD, but probably that's because Snowstruck isn't possessed.

Don't take this the worng way, you don't have to improve of any of the stuff I said. You get Tonic's 8/10.