Talk:Myn baisp Gap/@comment-25926749-20150608050629

Myn baisp Gap. Rolls off the tongue.

I have to say, at first, I was skeptical because of the name, but this actually a very interesting page. Some may say adding Sonic.EXE to the FNAF-verse is a wierd idea, but it's kinda cool how you tied it all together.

Silver Foxy is okay, I like the fact that it's not another Golden Freddy clone. It does sound kind of wrong though....I mean, his name is Silver Foxy, so what is he? A Silver Foxy. If that's all there is to it, him just being a silver recolor, then that's wierd. This is a very intersting page, and a nice one that keeps you reading, but If I may, a little critique....

I thought Sonic.EXE was a demented Sonic game, forgive me if I didn't read the creepypasta, but how exactly did he kill the kid? I mean, was he stalking him for a while, did he come out of the screen that night, etc.? Maybe you should add a bit of info about Sonic.EXE so the reader knows exactly what you are talking about.

Also, grammar could use a tiny bit of work in spots, but other than that, I can't find any more problems. This page is a strange one, and that's good. It keeps you in, and actually makes you want to read it instead of just scrolling down. 8/10.