Talk:Ten Nights at Jaclyn's/@comment-27010092-20170817022311

Storyline - 9/10
Well pieced together for the most part. It's a little bit simple with just incidents that cause the place to close and such, but it still fits together nicely and makes sense, which matters more.

Descriptivness - 9/10
Really only a few minor details were missing, such as a slight few with the animatronics. Other than that, though, it's good.

Characters - 10/10
Very original and interesting. I like how they each have different jobs/"personalities" that they use to run the place. Their advancement seems a little out of place time-wise, but dangit, I have a game where a big black cat-shaped ghost cluster runs around and occasionally kills people because $&&/&-&:$!.$/$/&, so it's not like it matters that much.

Well done!

Originality - 10/10
Where do I begin? We have the five nights cliché out the window, a place run by animatronics, animatronics that give you food during the night, God.

Some things seem to be borrowed from other fan-games, but here it seems more like inspiration than recycling ideas. Gee, you even found a way to make the MUSIC BOX an original mechanic. I think you're a f@cking genius.

Grammar/Spelling/Puncuation - 10/10
Everything's perfect. Enough said.

BONUS POINTS - 1/5
New thing I'm doing with these reviews. I decided this would be fit for just things I enjoyed about the page that didn't fit any categories of overall rating system.

I wanted to give 1 bonus point for the humor shown throughout the page. In my opinion, it made it more envoy able to read and spiced it up. I mean, it does get kind of boring when they're just plainly described and nothing else happens.

Overall Totoal - 9.8/10(Outstanding)
One of the greatest games I've seen on this wiki. The main reason it's so good is because it is much more original, with new ways to work old mechanics, robots which 85% run the place, a cat chef who brings you food, so on and so forth.

While there isn't a heavy mount of lore(yet) it is pieced together very well. In my opinion, it's more important to have a storyline which makes sense than a large one that doesn't make sense(take the older 2015-2016 Five Nights at Frisky's games as an example of what a storyline shouldn't exactly be like).

Overall, this this god d@mn amazing, and I demand you read it. If you do, pancakes will show up at your doorstep. Not a scam!