Talk:Fazbear Forces/@comment-27010092-20171228234953

Storyline - 8/10
The storyline is good. It seems a little bit too simple and not that "intriguing" with the introduction of it, and could have had more details. It's basically just the plot where there is an antagonist(s), people will/have perished, and a hero comes to stop the antagonist.

Other than that, though, it's gets much better later in the game. Really, I just think there could have been more detail added and a more intriguing introduction.

Originality - 9/10
Despite the simple and commonly used formula for the storyline, it was very original and creative. It contained many diverse levels and locations with cleverly named characters and bosses. The best one was undoubtedly Almighty Supreme Overlord Holy God-King Caelywobbles of Everything.

Characters - 9/10
The bosses were creative, the heroes were good( especially that SpringThing14 one, it was the 911/10 best ), all of it was good. The only thing is that some characters are still missing descriptions, even though you claimed it was complete. It's not a big deal, b u t  s t i l l

Descriptivness - 10/10
Like Five Nights: Crumbling Dreams, everything was described well. You're capable of reading any section from this page and understanding and having an image of what the place or thing described looks and is like.

Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
I did see one error, though I know it was a typo. The mistake didn't make the sentence incomprehensible, therefore I'm not deducting any points.

BONUS POINTS - 1/5
You got a bonus point! You're getting this since you got a lot of people together to help work on a page, which I haven't seen since....I don't remember. It's a very unique touch that I thought should have provided some extra credit for the page.

Overall Total - 9.4/10
Fazbear Forces is a very creative and descriptive game. It has a decent storyline, good characters, and is very unique. I'd recommend you'd read it if you have time.