Thread:Master Freddy 9352/@comment-36098810-20190419185959

Here's some notices:

First of all, your page quality doesn't exist. They're too small, not fitting the standards. I had to delete them, which is kinda good for me because that brings me closer to being an assistant, but still. Make quality pages.

Second, "songs". They Rocked Together didn't rhyme at all, it also didn't felt like a song. It's chorus and verses were too short. I think you should look up songs to get a bit of inspiration.

Third, "characters". Who the heck is this "Real Freddy"? Are you making up some canon and shoving it up our faces like Roblox shoves Rthro up the community's face until they like it? Seriously, read pages and get some ideas on what these characters NEED.

Fourth, the grammar. Oh gosh it's terrible. Use Google Translate, it "kinda" fixed r/engrish. Boy, my english vocabulary was larger and my grammar was better than the others' in like third grade (A LONG time ago). If it's not your first language, i understand that, but why making so short pages? Are you a kid or something?

Sorry if this was too harsh, i'm trying to be like a strict-teacher kind of guy. Hope you improve overtime, bud. 