Talk:Five Nights at Fazbear Funhouse: Remastered/@comment-27010092-20170729011841

Storyline: 8/10
Good! It is mostly well devoleped with thought put into it. Some parts seemed a little recycled from FNAF, but this is so,etching that will drag on more with originality. Great job!

Originality: 7/10
Not bad. However, as said, it seems like some parts of the storyline and some mechanics were recycled. For example, the music box mechanic, children getting stuffed into suits, not needing to come in on Night 6, so on and so forth. Other than that, though, it is good. You still managed to actually add your own OCs, too.

Grammar/Spelling/Puncuation: 9/10
Well done! I didn't spot any issues with the spelling, though noticed very slight errors with punctuation(mostly commas) and grammar. These include not putting "an" before a word that begins with a vowel and errors in the difference between the there, their and they're "family". However, it was still understandable and good overall. Plus, you're better with it nowadays than when you were back then.

Characters: 8/10

Good! The ones that are your own OCs are okay, but the others from the FNaF series aren't as much. This is mainly because they weren't really given that many if any touches to make them somewhat different from their original counterparts. They pretty much just have the same design as usual. Still good, though.

Descriptiveness: 9/10 Very good! Most parts were described well. However, if I were you, I would describe the locations throughout the map in one section so we know where everything is.

Overall Total: 8.2/10
Not bad! Despite its flaws, it is still well-made and enjoyable. Great job!