Thread:SpringThing14/@comment-29360781-20170901215509/@comment-27010092-20170901235330

First off, kudos to you. Most people will whine and complain about it if I criticize a game. But you're actually asking for tips, which is great.

To start off, don't pile everything into one paragraph. Instead, separate them and describe them individually in small sections. Please refer to the games listed at the end of this message for examples.

Next, describe your characters in greater detail. Describe their colors, accessories, etc. You don't have to go as far as precisely describing the shape of the ears and the endoskeleton, but still make sure there's enough detail for the reader to draw an image in their head.

You also should plan out the majority of the storyline before you make the game. I'm not saying you can't add in little things while making it(something I do occasionally), but don't create the entire story while you are making the game.

Another very important thing is originality. It's good to make your game stand out from the others so readers find it more interesting.

Overall, just put thought into it and make it stand out from the others. Get creative with it.

I actually rate games, and the highest rated ones were made by User:Demonic BB and User:FazbearFreak. If you want more tips, ask them.

Here are some games you can check out for inspiration and examples of these tips.

Five Nights at Frisky's: The Strange Sighting(By Me) Five Nights at Frisky's 2: The Awakening(By me) Ten Nights at Jaclyn's(By Demonic BB) Five Nights at Steve's 6(By Fazbear Freak) Summer Job(By Downtown Freezy)

There are a few others ones, too, that you can find if you look around. User:Caelywobbles234, User:Pinkyrocket, User:Shadowboy192, and User:Tina.g.sherwin make some good content.

I hope his helps.