Thread:Goldmelonmaster1/@comment-27061336-20160522000659/@comment-24045764-20160522042305

1. A Week At Pancake's I stopped working on a long time ago, and has other characters not in the game yet. https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/78183608/ Yes the drawings I made in 2014 are really bad because I was just reallybad back then.

2. First off, I said "Make your own characters." not "Add original names.". Well, I'm just saying don't steal the trademarked names of Scratch characters. Tic, Tac and Toc are good-ish ideas, but there's just a lot of room for improvement in my opinion. Constructive critisism

3. I meant it doesn't seem to be able to be taken seriously, that's all.

3.5. "Boob "jokes"" "The Boob Prison" " Joe drew Gobo with boobs. I was shocked that a 5 year old could draw boobs that well". If you want to make it scary, like a creepypasta should be, try to be serious.

Unless of course it's not a creepypasta, and instead a creepy pasta, just a creepy looking pasta. Though that isn't mentioned anywhere in the story, so I doubt it.